Matt Bellamy

There are a few typos, but you did say you didn't have time to edit it. This was alright, the rhyming seems a little forced though. You have some good ...

This made me smile, was it supposed to? Hehe. You have a very different style, I like it. especially the first stanza - the way you used description there surprised ...

This was good. It sounded good to read - the rhyming worked well. I also like how you ended the poem with a similar image to how you started, only ...

This is lovely. It's simple, but not lacking emotion, the rhyming works really well. I don't have anything bad to say about this, it's really pretty, and a little sad. ...

Not as good as some of your other work, and really, you normally paint such a picture in my head, I am a fan. But this seemed more like a ...

Well, it started off sounding rather cliché, a little forced rhyming, but it got better as it went on. The end was much better, good imagery, fast paced. Not bad.

Hmm, I thought I had commented on this before, but apparently not. An excellent poem, great imagery. Not too long either, a little longer and it probably would have been. ...

People seem to be afraid to critique your work. Well you don't leave us to say much, it's just too darn good. :roll:

Please refrain from posting the same piece more than once. This has already been posted and moved to the randomness forum at least once. Locked.

I really like this. I love the way it sounds in my head, it flows together, it's raw. I love it.

At first the "n"'s irritated me, but now, I think they give the poem a nice touch...a kind of accent, perhaps. I also think that "(sky)" doesn't need to be ...

Again, well-written. Again, not the most original idea, but still. I particularly like your imagery in the second-to-last stanza. Keep writing.

I liked this. I liked the structure, it kept in line with the format, and wasn't at all forced. A well-written piece.

Erm, wow. That was interesting. I can't critique it much because it was just so bizarre. But I think I liked it. It was a bit gross, but at least ...

I echo everyone else, but would also like to add that time seems to go very fast-it takes about five minutes for what would probably only be about a thirty ...